GRE作文高分复习攻略解读这4个练笔注意事项不能忘

说到GRE写作备考，因为有着官方题库作为基础，因此许多人的观点都是多练就行。然而实际上考生想要练好作文，只靠对着题库练习还远远不够。下面就由小编来为大家介绍一些更有效果的写作备考实用技巧。

GRE写作高分复习攻略解读 这4个练笔注意事项不能忘

写作备考要注意限时训练

对于任何的考试都是一样，练习不仅要趁早，还需要在练习的时候加强对写作模式的总结。有很多人都以为刚开始写好一点花多长时间都值得其实到后来发现根本不是这样，限时和不限时两种感觉完全不同。限时之后就会发现，GRE考试没有固定的套路在三十分钟内基本不可能完整的写出一篇从没见过的argument.这里的套路不是大家都熟知的在网上和书上流行的摸版。而是自己总结出来的一套写作模式，更重要的是思维模式。

GRE作文少用模板锻炼个人风格

小编建议大家写作尽量少用模版，因为每个人要有自己的写作套路，别人的模版尽量不要直接拿来用，毕竟那些还是别人的东西，最好自己能弄出来自己的风格来。而写作套路，就是仁者见仁，智者见智的事情了，练习作多了，提纲列多了，基本就出来了。

积累写作经验需要多加练习

对于GRE写作来说，想要得到高分就必须要勤加练习，通过练习我们能够得出自身的不足点，也能发现自己的写作优势。所以，在复习GRE写作的时候，一定要多加练习。

写完文章还要认真修改做好总结

写完之后立即改;自己改完之后再请别人改;放一段时间以后再回过头来自己改。修改多次之后自然会有提高，多掌握一些GRE词汇量。最好，平时一定要注意积累。句型、短语和相关单词的收集和分类很重要。比如对教育类的主题，一些的单词和短语是比较有针对性的，单词和短语最好从报纸、网页、国外的范文里或者网上经典文章里搜集，如果自己乱猜乱凑可能适得其反，而且每次用都觉得心里七上八下。

GRE写作满分范文1

Hospital?statistics?regarding?people?who?go?to?the?emergency?room?after?roller-skating?accidents?indicate?the?need?for?more?protective?equipment.??Within?this?group?of?people,?75?percent?of?those?who?had?

accidents?in?streets?or?parking?lots?were?not?wearing?any?protective?clothing?(helmets,?knee?pads,?etc.)?or?any?light-reflecting?material?(clip-on?lights,?glow-in-the-dark?wrist?pads,?etc.).??Clearly,?these?statistics?indicate?that?by?investing?in?high-quality?protective?gear?and?reflective?equipment,?roller?skaters?will?greatly?reduce?their?risk?of?being?severely?injured?in?an?accident.??

The?notion?that?protective?gear?reduces?the?injuries?suffered?in?accidents?seems?at?first?glance?to?be?an?obvious?conclusion.??After?all,?it?is?the?intent?of?these?products?to?either?provent?accidents?from?occuring??in?the?first?place?or?to?reduce?the?injuries?suffered?by?the?wearer?should?an?accident?occur.??However,?the?conclusion?that?investing?in?high?quality?protective?gear?greatly?reduces?the?risk?of?being?severely?injured?in?an?accident?may?mask?other?(and?potentially?more?significant)?causes?of?injuries?and?may?inspire?people?to?over?invest?financially?and?psychologically?in?protective?gear.??

First?of?all,?as?mentioned?in?the?argument,?there?are?two?distinct?kinds?of?gear?-?preventative?gear?(such?as?light?reflecting?material)?and?protective?gear?(such?as?helmets).??Preventative?gear?is?intended?to?warn?others,?presumably?for?the?most?part?motorists,?of?the?presence?of?the?roller?skater.??It?works?only?if?the?"other"?is?a?responsible?and?caring?individual?who?will?afford?the?skater?the?necessary?space?and?attention.??Protective?gear?is?intended?to?reduce?the?effect?of?any?accident,?whether?it?is?caused?by?an?other,?the?skater?or?some?force?of?nature.??Protective?gear?does?little,?if?anything,?to?prevent?accidents?but?is?presumed?to?reduce?the?injuries?that?occur?in?an?accident.??The?statistics?on?injuries?suffered?by?skaters?would?be?more?interesting?if?the?skaters?were?grouped?into?those?wearing?no?gear?at?all,?those?wearing?protective?gear?only,?those?wearing?preventative?gear?only?and?those?wearing?both.??These?statistics?could?provide?skaters?with?a?clearer?understanding?of?which?kinds?of?gear?are?more?beneficial.??

The?argument?above?is?weakened?by?the?fact?that?it?does?not?take?into?account?the?inherent?differences?between?skaters?who?wear?gear?and?those?who?do?not.??If?is?at?least?likely?that?those?who?wear?gear?may?be?generally?more?responsible?and/or?safety?conscious?individuals.??The?skaters?who?wear?gear?may?be?less?likely?to?cause?accidents?through?careless?or?dangerous?behavior.??It?may,?in?fact,?be?their?natural?caution?and?repsonsibility?that?keeps?them?out?of?the?emergency?room?rather?than?the?gear?itself.??Also,?the?statistic?above?is?based?entirely?on?those?who?are?skating?in?streets?and?parking?lots?which?are?relatively?dangerous?places?to?skate?in?the?first?place.??People?who?are?generally?more?safety?conscious?(and?therefore?more?likely?to?wear?gear)?may?choose?to?skate?in?safer?areas?such?as?parks?or?back?yards.??

The?statistic?also?goes?not?differentiate?between?severity?of?injuries.??The?conclusion?that?safety?gear?prevents?severe?injuries?suggests?that?it?is?presumed?that?people?come?to?the?emergency?room?only?with?severe?injuries.??This?is?certainly?not?the?case.??Also,?given?that?skating?is?a?recreational?activity?that?may?be?primarily?engaged?in?during?evenings?and?weekends?(when?doctors'?offices?are?closed),?skater?with?less?severe?injuries?may?be?especially?likely?to?come?to?the?emergency?room?for?treatment.???

Finally,?there?is?absolutely?no?evidence?provided?that?high?quality?(and?presumably?more?expensive)?gear?is?any?more?beneficial?than?other?kinds?of?gear.??For?example,?a?simple?white?t-shirt?may?provide?the?same?preventative?benefit?as?a?higher?quality,?more?expensive,?shirt?designed?only?for?skating.??Before?skaters?are?encouraged?to?invest?heavily?in?gear,?a?more?complete?understanding?of?the?benefit?provided?by?individual?pieces?of?gear?would?be?helpful.

The?argument?for?safety?gear?based?on?emergency?room?statistics?could?provide?important?information?and?potentially?saves?lives.??Before?conclusions?about?the?amount?and?kinds?of?investments?that?should?be?made?in?gear?are?reached,?however,?a?more?complete?understanding?of?the?benefits?are?needed.??After?all,?a?false?confidence?in?ineffective?gear?could?be?just?as?dangerous?as?no?gear?at?all.??

Commentary??

This?outstanding?response?demonstrates?the?writer's?insightful?analytical?skills.??The?introduction,?which?notes?that?adopting?the?topic's?fallacious?reasoning?could?".??爄nspire?people?to?over?invest?financially?and?psychologically?in?protective?gear,"?is?followed?by?a?comprehensive?examination?of?each?of?the?argument's?root?flaws.??Specifically,?the?writer?exposes?several?points?that?undermine?the?argument:??

--?that?preventive?and?protective?gear?are?not?the?same?

--?that?skaters?who?wear?gear?may?be?less?prone?to?accidents?because????they?are,?by?nature,?more?responsible?and?cautious?

--?that?the?statistics?do?not?differentiate?by?the?severity?of?the????injuries?

--?that?gear?may?not?need?to?be?high-quality?to?be?beneficial??

The?discussion?is?smoothly?and?logically?organized,?and?each?point?is?thoroughly?and?cogently?developed.??In?addition,?the?writing?is?succinct,?economical,?and?generally?error-free.??Sentences?are?varied?and?complex,?and?diction?is?expressive?and?precise.???

In?sum,?this?response?exemplifies?the?very?top?of?the?6?range?described?in?the?scoring?guide.??If?the?writer?had?been?less?eloquent?or?provided?fewer?reasons?to?refute?the?argument,?the?paper?could?still?have?received?a?6.?

GRE写作满分范文2

Hospital?statistics?regarding?people?who?go?to?the?emergency?room?after?roller-skating?accidents?indicate?the?need?for?more?protective?equipment.??Within?this?group?of?people,?75?percent?of?those?who?had?accidents?in?streets?or?parking?lots?were?not?wearing?any?protective?clothing?(helmets,?knee?pads,?etc.)?or?any?light-reflecting?material?(clip-on?lights,?glow-in-the-dark?wrist?pads,?etc.).??Clearly,?these?statistics?indicate?that?by?investing?in?high-quality?protective?gear?and?reflective?equipment,?roller?skaters?will?greatly?reduce?their?risk?of?being?severely?injured?in?an?accident.??

The?argument?presented?is?limited?but?useful.??It?indicates?a?possible?relationship?between?a?high?percentage?of?accidents?and?a?lack?of?protective?equipment.??The?statistics?cited?compel?a?further?investigation?of?the?usefulness?of?protective?gear?in?preventing?or?mitigating?roller-skating?related?injuries.??However,?the?conclusion?that?protective?gear?and?reflective?equipment?would?"greatly?reduce.risk?of?being?severely?injured"?is?premature.??Data?is?lacking?with?reference?to?the?total?population?of?skaters?and?the?relative?levels?of?experience,?skill?and?physical?coordination?of?that?population.??It?is?entirely?possible?that?further?research?would?indicate?that?most?serious?injury?is averted?by?the?skater's?ability?to?react?quickly?and?skillfully?in?emergency?situations.??

Another?area?of?investigation?necessary?before?conclusions?can?be?reached?is?identification?of?the?types?of?injuries?that?occur?and?the?various?causes?of?those?injuries.??The?article?fails?to?identify?the?most?prevalent?types?of?roller-skating?related?injuries.??It?also?fails?to?correlate?the?absence?of?protective?gear?and?reflective?equipment?to?those?injuries.??For?example,?if?the?majority?of?injuries?are?skin?abrasions?and?closed-head?injuries,?then?a?case?can?be?made?for?the?usefulness?of?protective?clothing?mentioned.??Likewise,?if?injuries?are?caused?by?collision?with?vehicles?(e.g.?bicycles,?cars)?or?pedestrians,?then?light-reflective?equipment?might?mitigate?the?occurences.??However,?if?the?primary?types?of?injuries?are?soft-tissue?injuries?such?as?torn?ligaments?and?muscles,?back?injuries?and?the?like,?then?a?greater?case?could?be?made?for?training?and?experience?as?preventative?measures.??

Commentary??

This?strong?response?gets?right?to?the?work?of?critiquing?the?argument,?observing?that?it?"indicates?a?possible?relationship"?but?that?its?conclusion?"is?premature."??It?raises?three?central?questions?that,?if?answered,?might?undermine?the?soundness?of?the?argument:??

--?What?are?the?characteristics?of?the?total?population?of?skaters??--?What?is?the?usefulness?of?protective?or?reflective?gear?in????preventing?or?mitigating?rollerskating-related?injuries??--?What?are?the?types?of?injuries?sustained?and?their?causes???

The?writer?develops?each?of?these?questions?by?considering?possible?answers?that?would?either?strengthen?or?weaken?the?argument.??The?paper?does?not?analyze?the?argument?as?insightfully?or?develop?the?critique?as?fully?as?required?for?a?6?paper,?but?the?clear?organization,?strong?control?of?language,?and?substantial?degree?of?development?warrant?more?than?a?score?of?4.?

GRE写作满分范文3

Hospital?statistics?regarding?people?who?go?to?the?emergency?room?after?roller-skating?accidents?indicate?the?need?for?more?protective?equipment.??Within?this?group?of?people,?75?percent?of?those?who?had?accidents?in?streets?or?parking?lots?were?not?wearing?any?protective?clothing?(helmets,?knee?pads,?etc.)?or?any?light-reflecting?material?(clip-on?lights,?glow-in-the-dark?wrist?pads,?etc.).??Clearly,?these?statistics?indicate?that?by?investing?in?high-quality?protective?gear?and?reflective?equipment,?roller?skaters?will?greatly?reduce?their?risk?of?being?severely?injured?in?an?accident.??

Although?the?argument?stated?above?discusses?the?importance?of?safety?equipment?as?significant?part?of?avoiding?injury,?the?statistics?quoted?are?vague?and?inconclusive.??Simply?because?75?percent?of?the?people?involved?in?roller-skating?accidents?are?not?wearing?the?stated?equipment?does?not?automatically?implicate?the?lack?of?equipment?as?the?cause?of?injury.??The?term?"accidents"?may?imply?a?great?variety?of?injuries.??The?types?of?injuries?one?could?incur?by?not?wearing?the?types?of?equipment?stated?above?are?minor?head?injuries;?skin?abrasions?or?possibly?bone?fracture?of?a?select?few?areas?such?as?knees,?elbows,?hands,?etc.?(which?are?in?fact?most?vulnerable?to?this?sport);?and/or?injuries?due?to?practising?the?sport?during?low?light?times?of?the?day.??During?any?physically?demanding?activity?or?sport?people?are?subjected?to?a?wide?variety?of?injuries?which?cannot?be?avoided?with?protective?clothing?or light-reflective?materials.??These?injuries?include?inner?trauma?(e.g.,?heart-attack);?exhaustion;?strained?muscles,?ligaments,?or?tendons;?etc.??Perhaps?the?numbers?and?percentages?of?people?injured?during?roller-skating,?even?without?protective?equipment,?would?decrease?greatly?if?people?participating?in?the?sport?had?proper?training,?good?physical?health,?warm-up?properly?before?beginning?(stretching),?as?well?as?take?other?measures?to?prevent?possible?injury,?such?as?common-sense,?by?refraining?from?performing?the?activity?after?proper?lighting?has?ceased?and?knowing?your?personal?limitations?as?an?individual?and?athlete.??The?statistics?used?in?the?above?reasoning?are?lacking?in?proper?direction?considering?their?assertions?and?therefore?must?be?further?examined?and?modified?so?that?proper?conclusions?can?be?reached.??

Commentary??

This?adequate?response?targets?the?argument's?vague?and?inconclusive?"statistics."??The?essay?identifies?and?critiques?the?illogical?reasoning?that?results?from?the?misguided?use?of?the?argument's?statistics:??

--?that?non-use?of?equipment?may?be?"automatically"?assumed?to?be?the????cause?of?injury?

--?that?"accidents"?may?refer?to?minor?injuries?

--?that?injuries?may?result?from?other?causes?--?skating?in?the?dark,????failure?to?train?or?warm-up?properly,?failure?to?recognize?one's????physical?limitations??

The?writer?competently?grasps?the?weaknesses?of?the?argument.??The?ideas?are?clear?and?connected,?but?the?response?lacks?transitional?phrases.??Development,?too,?is?only?adequate.??

Control?of?language?is?better?than?adequate.??The?writer?achieves?both?control?and?clarity?and?ably?conforms?to?the?conventions?of?written?English.??Overall,?though,?this?4?response?lacks?the?more?thorough?development?that?would?warrant?a?score?of?5.

GRE作文高分复习攻略解读 这4个练笔注意事项不能忘